NAPLAN writing prompts.

Narrative and persuasive prompts in the shape the test uses, by year level — free, with no sign-up. A prompt is half the practice; what the writing gets read for afterwards is the other half.

What does the NAPLAN writing prompt look like on the day?

Less than most people expect. Students in Years 3, 5, 7 and 9 receive a single prompt and a set time, and write one piece — a narrative or a persuasive text, depending on the year’s task. There is no choice of question, no stimulus booklet to work through, and nothing to have studied in advance. The prompt itself is usually short: an idea, an image or a statement, deliberately open enough that any student in the country can start from it. What the task asks and how it is marked goes through the criteria underneath it.

That shape is why the prompts below are bare. A practice prompt padded out with characters, a setting and a suggested plot is easier to write to and teaches the wrong reflex — on the day, the openness is the task.

How do you read a prompt in the first minute?

Three decisions, in this order, and then start writing. First: what is this actually about — not the topic, the point. A narrative prompt is a starting image, so the question is what changes by the end; a persuasive statement is a position, so the question is which side and why. Second: how small can it be. Most pieces that fail in a timed test fail because they were too big to finish, and a marker reads an unfinished piece as an unfinished piece. Third: what is the last line going to do. A writer who knows where the piece closes can spend the opening on something better than working out the plot.

Then stop planning. A minute or two is enough at this length; the writing is where the marks are, and a plan that runs to a quarter of the time is a plan that ate the piece.

Write a story about the idea below. Plan it, write it, and finish it in the time you have.

The thing nobody else noticed.

Finish the story. A small story that ends is worth more than a large one that stops.

On the day

One prompt, a set time, and one piece — narrative or persuasive, whichever the year’s task asks for. Spend the first minutes planning; a piece that ends is worth more than a piece that stops.

Three narrative prompts, read closely

The prompt is easy; knowing what to do with it is the skill. Here is how I would read three of them — not a model answer, which would be the template this whole cluster argues against, but the thinking that happens before a good response starts.

The key.

Two words, and that is the whole gift. A prompt this bare is asking what a writer notices, so the first decision is not the plot but the object: whose key, to what, found where. The trap is a treasure hunt — a key, a hunt, a chest, an ending that arrives because the time ran out. A key that opens something ordinary, and matters anyway, is a better story and a shorter one.

Someone new arrived, and everything changed.

The prompt has already handed over the structure: before, arrival, after. What it has not handed over is scale, and that is where these go wrong. A new student, a new baby, a new neighbour — one room, two people, one thing that is different by the end — closes properly. A stranger who transforms a town does not close at all; it stops.

Two people remembered the same day differently.

This one rewards a writer who can hold two voices without announcing that they are doing it. The weak version alternates paragraphs and states the disagreement outright. The strong version lets the second account contradict the first in one detail and trusts the reader to catch it — which is also, incidentally, exactly what the cohesion criterion is looking at.

Three persuasive prompts, read closely

Persuasive writing is where formula coaching does the most damage, because a formula is easiest to fake here and easiest to spot. Each of these is written to reward a real position.

School should start later in the morning.

A statement a student has a real view on, which is the point. The weak response lists three reasons of equal weight and adds a rhetorical question. The strong one concedes the obvious objection early — parents leave for work before school starts — answers it, and spends the last paragraph on the argument it would actually defend out loud.

Phones should be banned in classrooms.

Almost every student has an opinion and a stock of borrowed arguments here, which is the danger: borrowed arguments read as borrowed. The response that lands is the one built from something the writer has seen. Notice too that the position matters less than whether the reasons hold — a marker is reading the argument, not agreeing with it.

Everybody should have to study a subject they are not good at.

A harder statement, and worth writing for that reason. It cannot be answered with a list, because the interesting case is the exception: which subject, for whom, and what is actually gained. A student who works out the limit of their own position and says so is writing at the top of the criteria, not hedging.

For a parent

How to use these at home

A prompt does nothing on its own. What makes it worth the hour is what happens after the writing.

  • One piece, occasionally, in one sitting. Writing a whole piece to time with no chance to revise is a distinct skill, and most students have never tried it. Two or three times is enough to remove the surprise; a weekly drill turns writing into a chore.
  • Read it back with them, out loud.Most of what a marker would notice — a sentence that runs out of control, a paragraph doing two jobs, an ending that arrives because the time did — is audible before it is explicable. Ask what the piece is about; if the answer takes a while, that is the finding.
  • Do not mark it against the criteria. The criteria describe what good writing is, which makes them a poor tool for a parent at a kitchen table and a good tool for the person teaching. One honest reaction to the writing is worth more than nine scores.
  • Keep the pieces. Four pieces across a year show a trajectory, which is the one thing a single report cannot show you.

How the NAPLAN writing test is marked — the criteria on one page

The criteria a NAPLAN writing script is scored against, plainly, and what preparation is actually worth doing.

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