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Argument analysis: naming a technique is not analysing it.

Twenty marks for an analysis of how argument and language persuade, on a text no student has seen before. It is the section where VCAA has repeated itself most exactly, in near-identical words, for the better part of a decade — and the criticism is always the same one.

Data: VCAA exam specifications and assessment reports 2015–2025 · updated

What the section asks

From VCAA’s examination specifications: Section C will consist of an analysis of argument and language and will be worth a total of 20 marks. Students will be required to analyse the use of argument(s) and language to persuade an intended audience… in an unseen persuasive text. (VCE-43).

Two words in that sentence do most of the work. Unseen means the material cannot be prepared — only the method can. And intended audience means the analysis is not about whether the argument is good, or whether the student agrees with it, but about how it is built to work on the particular readers it is aimed at.

Section C is one of three equally weighted sections in a paper of 60 marks sat over 15 minutes of reading time and three hours of writing.

Quoted from VCAA’s VCE English examination specifications.

What examiners keep saying about Section C

There is one criticism here, and VCAA has made it in nearly the same words for six years and more. “Identification of argument is only the first step in the analysis process” in 2020 became “identification of a linguistic feature is only the very beginning of analysis” in 2023, and by 2025 the assessors were using “identification but limited attempt at analysis” as a benchmark description of weak work (VCE-20). Naming a device scores nothing on its own. It is the move most students make, and it is the move the reports have been warning against the longest.

The 2023 report explains what is missing when only identification happens. Students understood they had to analyse the argument, but “many struggled to see the ways in which language (written, spoken and visual) were used to support and reinforce the ideas presented by the writers” — argument and language treated as two separate lists rather than one machine (VCE-03).

Tone is where this shows most plainly. Listing or mislabelling tone without explaining its effect appears in every report from 2019 through 2025 — seven consecutive years — and was absent from 2015–2018, so it is a habit that has grown rather than faded. The 2025 wording is blunt about the reader’s experience of it: “There was an attempt to identify tone. It was unclear why this information was included as no analysis follows” (VCE-23).

The same gap appears in Section A, which suggests it is one skill rather than two. In 2023 assessors reported that many students could identify the ideas an author conveyed but “struggled to explain how they had developed this reading” of the text (VCE-01). Naming what is there, in either section, is the step before the work — not the work.

  • 6+ years

    Of VCAA saying identification is only the first step — 2019, 2020, 2023 and 2025 in near-identical words.

    VCE-20
  • 7straight years

    2019–2025, of tone listed or mislabelled without its effect explained — absent from the 2015–2018 reports.

    VCE-23
  • 20marks

    For analysing how argument and language persuade an intended audience, in a text not seen before.

    VCE-43

What analysing one technique actually looks like

Every guide to this section offers a list of devices. The lists are not wrong, and a student who cannot name what is in front of them is stuck. But a name is where the marks begin, not where they are earned — so here is the whole move on a single technique, at the length the exam actually wants.

Take inclusive language, the most over-used observation in Section C. A response that says the writer uses inclusive language to make the reader feel included has named it and restated it, which is the pattern the assessors describe as identification with limited attempt at analysis. Three questions turn it into analysis, and they are the questions asked of every technique in every lesson here.

WHAT is happening? Not the device — the situation. A writer arguing for a council development uses our streets and we all remember while addressing residents who have lived in the suburb for decades.

HOW is it delivered? Now the device, located precisely. The first-person plural does not appear in the writer’s claims about cost or planning law; it appears only in the sentences about memory and belonging. The technique is doing one job in one place, not decorating the whole piece.

WHY does it matter? This is the part being marked. The pronoun quietly enrols the reader in a group that already agrees — and it does so precisely where the argument is weakest on evidence. A reader who accepts our streets has conceded the shared stake before any factual claim is tested. The technique is not making them feel included; it is making disagreement feel like defection.

That last sentence is analysis. It names an effect on a particular audience, ties it to where in the argument the device sits, and could not be written about any other text. The three-step shape — WHAT, HOW, WHY — is the one framework worth memorising, because it is the one that refuses to let a response stop at the name.

The same move is visible on a student’s own page in this annotated textual analysis, where dramatic irony is named, located in Atticus praising the courts as “great levellers” immediately before they fail Tom, and then pushed to why it matters: systems built for moral principle can be socially distorted. Naming, locating, explaining — in that order, every time.

How to use the weeks that remain

Because the text is unseen, everything preparable here is method. Three habits are worth building, and each of them attacks the identification fault directly.

Start from the audience, not the technique.The specifications say “intended audience”, and that is the question that turns naming into analysing: not what is this, but what is this meant to do to someone who already believes X. A sentence that names a device and stops has skipped the only part being marked.

Analyse argument and language together. The 2023 criticism is precisely that the two get separated. Working through annotated persuasive writing — where the choice and its effect are set out side by side — is the most direct way to see them operating as one thing. The persuasive readings here are annotated for the same purpose.

Practise on unseen material, under time. Every paper from 2015 to 2025 carries a Section C text, and all of them are linked at VCAA. A text a student has not met, analysed in the time the exam allows, is the only rehearsal that tests the method rather than the memory. Learning the method itself is what one-to-one VCE English tutoring is for.

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