Analysis

What VCE English examiners keep saying.

Every year, VCAA’s assessors publish a report on how the state’s largest exam was actually answered. Read one and you learn what went wrong last October. Read eleven — every report from 2015 to 2025 — and something starker appears: four criticisms recur in every single year, across three different study designs. The examiners are not describing a cohort. They are describing a teaching gap.

Four complaints, eleven years, no exceptions

We collected all eleven VCAA English external assessment reports published for the 2015–2025 examinations and coded every recurring criticism assessors make of student writing. Four of them appear in all eleven reports — 44 of 44 cells in the coding matrix — surviving the 2017 and 2024 study-design changes, different section structures, different texts and different cohorts.

Assessor criticism’15’16’17’18’19’20’21’22’23’24’25Years
Pre-prepared or memorised responses11/11
Not answering the topic actually set11/11
Identifying features without analysing them11/11
Retelling plot in place of analysis11/11
Weak sentence control, vocabulary display··9/11
Tone listed without explaining its effect7 of 7 since ’19
Comparing by adjacency (“similarly…”)n/an/a···n/an/aSection B era
Handwriting legibility’19–’23
01 — 11 of 11 reports

Pre-prepared and memorised responses

there seems to be a dependence on formulaic, prepared responsesVCAA report, 2015
Contorted a previously prepared response to connect with the examination title and stimulus.VCAA report, 2025

The alternative is not spontaneity — it is preparation at the level of thinking: knowing the text's ideas well enough to build the essay the topic asks for, on the day.

02 — 11 of 11 reports

Not answering the topic actually set

too many students want to respond to their own question rather than grappling with the ideas of the topic as it is presentedVCAA report, 2015
It was disappointing to see clearly competent students failing to address the set question or twisting its meaning to suit their own purposes.VCAA report, 2019

By 2025 the report itemises five distinct modes of topic misreading. Practising with unseen topics — and marking the plan, not just the essay — trains the first five minutes, where this failure happens.

03 — 11 of 11 reports

Identifying features without analysing them

Simply labelling arguments with these terms is no better than merely listing language techniques … Identification is only the first stepVCAA report, 2019
Identification but limited attempt at analysis.VCAA report, 2025

The teachable move is the second sentence: what the feature does to the reader positioned by it — not that it exists.

04 — 11 of 11 reports

Retelling plot in place of analysis

there was a greater dependence on summary, restatement and quotation at the expense of analysis of ideasVCAA report, 2020
there was a sustained dependence on summary, restatement and quotation at the expense of analysis of ideasVCAA report, 2021

One word changed between those two sentences — “greater” became “sustained”. Evidence belongs in service of an argument; retelling is what fills the page when the argument is missing.

Coding by behaviour rather than exam section, which is what lets the claim cross study designs. Every quotation and count on this page is registered in the practice’s evidence register (entries VCE-17 to VCE-24), each verified word-for-word against the report it comes from before publication.

The authority repeats itself

The most striking pattern is not that students struggle — it is that VCAA has been reduced to saying the same sentence about the same failure, year after year:

“Identification of argument is only the first step in the analysis process; however, many students struggled to move beyond this into analysis mode.”VCAA English examination report, 2020
“Identification of a linguistic feature is only the very beginning of analysis.”VCAA English examination report, 2023
“Identification but limited attempt at analysis.”VCAA English examination report, 2025

The memorisation complaint follows the same arc, and escalates — by 2022 the report printed a template introduction found in student scripts beside its verdict. The industry sold students a shortcut; the assessors recognised it on sight.

  1. 2019Assessors noted a marked increase in answers that were learned excerpts from either commercial guides or VCE help sites on the internet.
  2. 2021Some students unwisely resorted to using previously learned and memorised elements … despite previous advice to avoid this tendency.
  3. 2022It bore a disquieting resemblance to material published on the internet.
  4. 2025Contorted a previously prepared response to connect with the examination title and stimulus.

The average answer scores just over half marks — every section, every year

VCAA began publishing per-section mark distributions in 2021. In the five years since, across fifteen published section averages, every single one sits between 5.4 and 5.8 out of 10. The band did not move when the study design was reset in 2024. Whatever changes around the exam, the distribution of skill it measures does not.

5.4–5.8024681020212022202320242025marks /10
YearSection A /10Section B /10Section C /10
20215.85.55.6
20225.65.65.6
20235.65.55.6
20245.65.45.4
20255.45.45.5

Averages as printed in each report’s mark-distribution tables. Earlier reports published per-text averages only, so the claim is deliberately scoped to 2021–2025.

One criticism — exactly one — is ever reported as improving. Simplistic technique-listing was “slowly disappearing” in 2019, and by 2022 most students were “less reliant on labelling language techniques”. In 2025 it returns in new clothes: “generic analysis” of “very familiar linguistic devices”. The label was dropped; the habit underneath it was not.

What this means if you have a student in the system

Read as a whole, the corpus says the recurring failures of VCE English are not knowledge failures. Students know their texts — assessors say so almost every year. What recurs is craft: answering the question actually asked, moving from naming a feature to explaining its work, building an argument instead of reciting a prepared one. Those are habits, and habits are built across years, not crammed in October — which is the premise this practice teaches from. The same close-reading moves appear, at smaller scale, in the annotated student work published on this site, and the exam timetable fixes the horizon that preparation runs toward.

The reports themselves are public and worth reading in full — our year-by-year index of past exams and reports links every one at VCAA. Our coding matrix, quotations and file-level provenance for every claim above are in the evidence register.

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Eleven years of the same four criticisms.

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